幫我翻譯一下 (急要)

Zeika

現在科技非常發達,電腦已經成為我們生活中不可缺少的東西,我清楚知道,電腦是有好和不好這兩方面.好的原因是它可以令我們在空閒時作娛樂,也可以成為儲存用的工具.但是,經常使用電腦會令眼睛受損,例如會近視等.在我的角度來看,電腦永遠都是一件好的東西,玩電腦是一個手部運動,令我們的手指更靈活,對我們的腦是有幫助的,我十分喜歡電腦

就是依一段...麻煩了

直落不蘭雅

The technology is very advanced now, and computer has became an
indispensable part of our life, I know it clearly that computer has both good and bad side,.The fact that makes it good is that we can do reacreational things with computer,and we can store informations in it. But if we use too much it will damage our eyes such as causing near-sight. For me,computer is always a good stuff,
using computer is an exercise of hands , makes our finger more nimble,and
definitely good for developing of our brain. I like computer very much.

Katliang

to Zeika 請把你自己嘗試翻譯的PO出來
to 直落不蘭雅 妳的翻譯雖然不錯~但是在下要給你一個建議~中翻英時~不要有中文的口腔~想想看如果你是外國人~你會如何表達那句中文~^^
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以下是在下翻譯的:
We can see that technology has been advanced now, for computers has been an indispensable tool in our lifes.  There are pros and cons for using a computer, pros being our entertainment during our spare time or being a storage for excess informatino, cons for damaging out health like eye sight.  However, for me, computer is more good than bad, for when we are entertaining ourself through gaming, we get to do finger exercising  and developing our brains from strategy games.  Overall I like computer very much.