【中翻英】青春 / Youth

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唔...好像差不多了...補充一下

第一句可以用not only...but also...併起來，人生階段好像是milestone

變成(套用MM的)

Youth is not only a milestone of lifetime but also one kind of mood, the willpower, the rich imagination and the abundant sentiment.

然後小小改一下最後一句

Youth is when you are self-confident and have confidence, but whenever you have doubt、fear and despair, you just fade away.

[quote=死亡之翼]everybody has capacity to enjoy life。[/quote]

唔...capacity是有能力、資格去做什麼，偏重能力

在此文章中的，有資格盡情地享受人生，好像是指允許資格那種